雅思口语P2 Describe a city you have been to and would like to visit again(文字版）

Shanghai is the city that I have been to many times and certainly I want to travel there again. You know, I went there last summer vacation and stayed for 2 weeks at a time, I loved that city, its life pace, its public transport system or such. I lived in the city center, not in the countryside. So, I could have a better understanding of the reality of local life. In fact, at that time, I didn't do anything all day long, but travelled to different places for fun. As far as I know, shanghai is a great city, where is the center of finance and economy of my country. Millions of people preferred to live and work in that city. The most charming point for me was that its working opportunities. If you want to hunt a decent job, then come to shanghai. You would probably have a great career in general. Now I am a college student, after 4 year`s study I would find a job in shanghai. That is it.